I'm really chuffed with how the crit went. I've definitely come away with a bit of a smile on my face.
I was paired with Mitch, and together we took time to look at other's work and gave them feedback. He kindly took some notes down whilst other people in our group commented on what I'd done so far..
-Butt loads of work. Impressive
-Compass looks better as star
-Work on blog is all there
-What stationary? Be specific - pen, pencil, rubber, ruler, pad
Range - things instead of leaves - acorns, seeds, nuts, fruit, sticks
Books - simple is good
-Make owl more ''owl-like''
I had asked a few questions which I hoped could be answered during the crit. They were:
1. Does my museum logo work across the stationary?
2. My museum posters will work across the topic of the 4 seasons, are there any other topics that you can think would work?
3. I want to keep my book covers simple.. but are they too simple? If so, how could they be ''improved''?
4. What flowers would you associate with summer and spring?
5. Museum posters... what other information should I include at the bottom? Should I make the website smaller etc?
The answers I got were:
1. Works well, integrate more with design.
2. Poster- different trees? Different leaves? Seasons?
3. Book covers- good look and work well together. Two books with the same colour background though?
That was more or less it, from what I can remember anyways. The last two answers to my questions weren't written down!